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Save your breath

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"So if you love me let me go”

” I don´t deserve to have you”
by Slipknot
( i was listening this song and Lana Del Rey - Born To Die --» [link])
this piece is a beautifull moment of her song :love: :heart: i just wanted to pratice kiss a textures anatomy…. so i chose this song to inspire me *.*

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wacom bamboo
ps cs5

hope you liked ::aww:I will apresiate your feedback
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Hey there,

I saw you wanted a critique on #dAWishingWell so I came over here to try and help!

I love the feeling in this. You can really feel their passion. The way you drew their lips together looks great!

I think this picture could be much more powerful if it had higher contrast. There is little depth to the tones and I think that causes the picture to appear dull and flat. (A good way to see this is if you make the picture black and white.) A part of me wishes that the outer most parts of the picture were as finalized/detailed as the center since it almost looks not finished. To keep the focus, it could always be blurred out or painted with a blurry effect.

You've got some strong colors which is great! You just need to push a little more :)