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Rose Gold - Prologue

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11:48 PM.

                There wasn’t a single car passing through the narrow street beside Neuza to help light her way. The sky didn’t show any signs of stars, it was pitch black. She strained her eyes against the darkness and forced her eyes to stay open as she drove 180 km/h. Neuza had been driving this way for over an hour. Her arm was losing blood from a wound caused by a 9mm. She glanced up at the rearview mirror for the hundredth time to see if they were following her. At last she felt like she had finally shook them off her trail. She let out a sigh of relief, but she did not bring her foot off the gas pedal to slow down any. She couldn’t stop now, she couldn’t slow down. She needed to put more space between them. The more the better. Despite the pain in her arm, her adrenaline was overpowering all other senses. She felt awful and knew that she was starting to show physical signs of the trauma of the shot.

                As she pressed her foot down to accelerate a loud noise echoed through her car and she had about a moment to dodge a fallen tree that was on the road before her. As she quickly maneuvered around it her weak arm gave way and she lost her grip on the steering wheel. She gripped it quickly with her other hand but the car was already spinning. The car stopped abruptly with a loud crash against a large pine tree. Her hand was shaking and she was panting in panic, her head lying against the steering wheel to catch her breath. Neuza needed to calm herself down if she wanted to get away from them. They could catch up to her at any moment. She raised her head and looked to her right arm. She was bleeding through the leather jacket, the bullet hole in the jacket soaked with her blood. With her other arm she gently pulled the sleeve off her injured arm and turned to the bag she had with her. She found a scarf inside and tied it around her arm to hopefully stop the bleeding.

                A sound of another car’s engine rang in her ears. Was it coming from behind or in front of her? She sincerely prayed for the former possibility otherwise she would be lost. She looked in front of her but didn’t see any light coming her way. That meant that they were on her trail again. DAMMIT!  She thought to herself and quickly got to her senses. Neuza picked up her bag from the side seat and got out of the car. She was blocked in everywhere she looked. There was nothing around, save for trees and the sound of water…The sound of water! It meant that she was near a river! The girl walked across the street and if it weren’t for the reflection of the water she would have fallen in. An idea struck her when she saw the river and she quickly returned back to the car. She tried the ignition but it wouldn’t start. She shoved the car into neutral and pushed it towards the direction of the river. After it got closer to the river, it slid right down towards the river. She heard it crash into the water but didn’t have time to contemplate on what to do next. She walked the opposite direction from her car and walked into the forest.

                Barely into the forest she heard a car whiz by. They hadn’t stopped to investigate. For her sake the plan had worked. It seemed they weren’t aware of her car over in the riverbed. The sounds of the howling win and running water helped to conceal any clues. She still couldn’t risk going to the street. Neuza knew that returning to the street there would be a possibility of someone passing by and giving her a ride. But that gave the probability of being intercepted again. Thus, she turned and decided to head deeper into the forest.


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:faint: i don't belive that finally i'm able to show a litle of my ....mess writings :giggle:

This is a novel that i started to write some moths ago, and is already at 2 chapter, the thing is...i'm too slow to write anything XD sometimes i wriite portuguese then english and then i re-write and so one just to have this litle show to you :faint: 
This is a novel that take place in the midle of nowere XD yes exacly that XD you will understand why ... Neuza realizes that after a single day :giggle:
What i can tell about Neuza? 
- shes really a stuborn woman that needs to learn a lot in life and more important she need to learn how to control her own emotions and scares :nod:

I really hope that you can feel what i tried to express by words like i express by drawing XD i know its diferent but i'm trying hard :3 and i have a special words for my dear friend RaisloverSakura for all the support she give me, advice, feedback and in top of that she was the editor :nod: so i'm really flatered for your supporting dear :tighthug:



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Prologue ( this one)´
Chap 01»  Rose Gold - Chapter 1                   Neuza was starting to feel her exhaustion hit her with every step she took. All the adrenaline that had been there when she was driving had dissipated. And with that, the pain had increased in her arm. It was hot sharp pain, the burning centralizing around the hole where the bullet had entered. It was impossible for her to run or to turn back. She continued on in long strides. She was out of breath, her chest rising and falling heavily. Neuza felt something cold splash the back of her neck and she looked up at the sky as it began to rain.
                “Ohh great, this is the best…” she muttered to herself. The small drops that fell on her pants were now increasing quickly. It was pouring within minutes and she found herself more and more confused and lost inside the thick forest.  She was w


Genere: drama, romance, adventure, psycological, comedy, action novel so the target is for +16 ( due to some language, violence and such, i hope you understand :aww:)

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Important. You are not allowed to use, publish or "trace", this is apersonal project :nod: thank you

I would really apreciate your feedback on my writting guys XD i'm really scared lOL so if you ahve some device i will read and save it :nod: for next! cause i think on publish more of this novel :P
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Glad to see you posting some story stuff! :la:
Hope you'll get in the mood to write some more! :heart: