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It's your turn to dance by Fayerin It's your turn to dance by Fayerin
hello :D

today i finish :D:D
I spent a long time to draw the hand and all its details ... I dont noif it it looks realistic :/
the yellow circle symbolizes a reflector of light - time for action doll

I hope you enjoyed this concept :)

hand model : mine :D
size : A4
time : 7h 30 min

"I welcome all critic because that way I can improve"
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:icontheheek:
theheek Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
love the details
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :aww:
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:icontheheek:
theheek Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
u are very welcome
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In-Via Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, really nice. :)
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you *.*
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FadwaAngela Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi :iconluvluvplz:

:star::star::star:
Your beautiful art has been featured in DA news , here >>> [link]
:star::star::star:
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HayleyLV Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Adorable! Love the idea!
And I especially love the use of colour on that hand! Looks amazing!:love:
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) I really happy to know that !
Thanks :D I tried to make the hand realistic :):w00t:
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HayleyLV Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
You're welcome =) Did it really well!
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D:D
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:icondeathernete:
deathernete Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course it does look realistic! Especially the hand! Love it! (:
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^ Thank you so much :D:D:D
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Musoliasla Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student General Artist
Nice colours and good detail in your hand :) liking it! Your doll does look a little disfigured as you've said, but I find it adds towards the effect in a way of mystery. Really nice drawing! :)
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)
I really apreciate oyour opinion :) they help me to improve :)
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Musoliasla Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student General Artist
You're very welcome, m'dear! :)
I hope that it may have helped you a little! :aww:
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
of corse you helped i really apreciate :)
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bhatnagar80 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Mind blowin!!
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :D:D
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mollyh123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
That is soooo awesome!!! The hand looks really realistic <3
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much i'm really happy :D
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No-2B Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really good. You draw so well with colored pencil. I love your grasp of color. To answer your question the hand looks realistic, but the doll does not. Its not a bad thing, it doesn't retract... it adds a kind of interesting feel to the whole picture.
Some other things.... As far as the hand is concerned (I love to draw hands so I know how hard it can be) you've done a great job, but as I look at it longer I begin to notice that the proportions are a bit off. Either the fingers are too small for the hand (excluding the thumb), or the palm and thumb are too big for the fingers.
From the perspective of the pic it looks like the hand is supposed to be above the doll. However, right now, it looks like the hand is lying on the table next to the doll. Normally you'd dull the color of the further object, but since you have a spotlight on the doll that changes things. I think the reason the perspective turns out like it does is because you don't have the light shining on the hand as well. Even if the hand isn't in the way of the light, it would be brighter along the tips of the fingers to reflect that the light is there. I notice that you've included some yellow into the fingers, maybe for that purpose... but I would try to lighten them up as well. BUT if the hand is supposed to be lying on the table, then you've done a great job. And actually now that I look at it again, I see some shadows that I didn't see before sooooo maybe my comment is all moot.
All that being said... you've done WAY better than I could!
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much:)
Yes you are right about the doll does not seem realistic ... I have to train the doll design because it has its own characteristics which could not convey the crayons ... yes it is very difficult to design and very tiring because it has many details and shades that we must respect. I took a picture of my hand and felt a little strange perspective give seem disproportionate. yes I used yellow at your fingertips because it is light reflective. Thank you for your time:)
greatly appreciate your critical part because it helps me to improve.
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MiyuKyuu Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
wow this is truly amazing the shading and everything looks wow
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D:D Thank you I'm really happy to know that :)
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MiyuKyuu Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
np :)
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shelleysupernova Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this. You have a really expressive way with pencils and the hand is amazing. My suggestion for improvement would be to refine the background.
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :D:D i really apreciate your critic :)
ya you are rigth the backgroud need to be fixed :P, when i has drawing this i has stressed lool and next mt drawing buuh :/ loL
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shelleysupernova Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are very welcome. I think some people can take offence at suggestions on how to improve their work but I see it as a compliment that someone would take the time to offer a comment on my work so I hope you realise that it is a compliment from me!
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ya I understant :) you are rigth but for me is very importante xD for my improve and tht ok if ir a bad ou good thing :D
Thank you so much for your time :)
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shelleysupernova Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:-)
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Mashimoshi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011   General Artist
Woah you're good with coloured pencils, I mean look at that hand!
The shadows are so well done and also the wrinkles! I'm glad you made this big so I could zoom in and have a look
at it more, I could observe how you placed the colours etc, it was interesting.
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
I really happy to know that you like my hand :D:D ya i made big for that :) because the drawing have details that this way everyone can see :)
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Mashimoshi Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011   General Artist
Oh no problem :D
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:iconjes221:
Jes221 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
WOW!!! So awesome!!
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much *.*
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:iconjes221:
Jes221 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
no prob =D
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xbanx Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist
nicely done ^^
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D:D
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Kurayami-i Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
omg!! That ist soo great, i cant stop watchin it! *-*
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*.* Thank you so much i really happy to know that :D:D:D:D
Thanks for the fav too *.*
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Kurayami-i Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thats so wonderful, it deserves it :)) kepp that talent ^^
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much I'm really happy :D:D
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Kreiya Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
I like how you mixed more colors on the hand!
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Thank you so much I'm happy to know that!
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
wow this is so cool! I love the hand :heart:
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much i'm glad :D:D
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angrboda555 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
your welcome I'm glad you're glad :)
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Joilieder Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Good hand and marionette. The brown is mainly what doesn't make it look realistic because you can see your strokes. I do not know what the trick is for colored pencils and that's something I'm working on with just graphite pencils. Nice picture tho. Good details! :iconkittyglompplz:
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:iconfayerin:
Fayerin Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much i really apreciate your words :)
i know the backgroud shoul be paited more soft xD
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ZawArt Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011   Traditional Artist
Trully great art! The hand looks awesome!
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